Film Trailer Feedback:
Feedback given by Teachers and peers:
WWW:
Feedback given by Teachers and peers:
WWW:
- Good editing
- Cross cutting, at the beginning with the flashbacks to Rosewood's childhood
- Split screen, guests waking up from being drugged
EBI:
- Include more quick shots (1sec)
- Add more dialogue towards the end
- More sound effects
- More camera movement
- Add more emphasise to dinner scene
- More flashbacks of the good moments
- Alter the 'who are you?' moment
- Film the drugging of the drink
Our film being targeted to a an audience of young adults, that being 15+, therefore gaining advice and feedback from our peers in the lesson was extremely helpful. it allowed us to be able to understand how to really gain the attention of those we are trying to reach, understanding what they want to see form the trailer.
Change 1:
Right from the beginning of our planning process we wanted to defy the stereotypical thriller film with someone going missing or a murder taking place, we wanted to make it unexpected, non- conventional by challenging that and making the whole plot centre around Christmas and make Scarlett Rosewood a female antagonist an evil version of Santa Clause plotting her revenge on her childhood friends. We tried to present Santa as in a panning shot to present her true identity, however, the shot was too long, and not as smooth as we would have liked it to be, so we changed it by revealing little parts of Santa, for example we shot a close up of Santa's hand wrapping around the door, and her feet walking past the camera, we felt it built up the tension, until the long hand held camera shot when the guest is running down the hall and turning around to see Santa coming after her. This then helped to make the shots a lot faster like was mentioned in our audience feedback, therefore making it seem more like a real film trailer.
Change 2:
We also recorded some more voice overs to give our trailer more dimension to it , it also helped to tell the story of the plot better, and help the audience make a first impression of each character better. These included just more heavy breathing to accentuate the panic that the guests are feeling in the trailer, and make the audience feel as uncomfortable as they're. We also recorded the guests discussing among each other, there hesitations about going to the dinner, to create that sense of dramatic irony among the audience and the characters in the trailer. It also helps to pick up the pace of the trailer, make everything come together and run more smoothly.
Change 3:
we wanted to make the ending shot with me waking up and taking in a sharp breath more dramatic, so we tried increasing the audio volume, and slowing the footage for that section of the sequence down, so that that in hale would match the same terror that you can see in my eyes. I think that helped to create that dramatic ending to the we were aiming for, which worked well when it came to the non diegtic music playing again for when the inter title says coming out Christmas 2018
Change 4:
on our first draft our idea was to create a dinner with Scarlett heading the meal and then zooming into her face to make it obvious it was her who was the antagonist in the trailer, however we had cut the footage when the camera started to move, therefore making the zoom in look cheap, and unrealistic. For our second draft and final draft we learnt to make the footage into a still image first then start to zoom into the footage before the camera starts moving, which created a smoother transition into the zoom in, therefore making it look more professional, and more aesthetically pleasing to watch.
Change 4:
on our first draft our idea was to create a dinner with Scarlett heading the meal and then zooming into her face to make it obvious it was her who was the antagonist in the trailer, however we had cut the footage when the camera started to move, therefore making the zoom in look cheap, and unrealistic. For our second draft and final draft we learnt to make the footage into a still image first then start to zoom into the footage before the camera starts moving, which created a smoother transition into the zoom in, therefore making it look more professional, and more aesthetically pleasing to watch.
Change 5:

Our second draft included only one inter title "Are you on the naughty list?" with no ratings from any other company, that had watched the film, this therefore took away from the features of trailer, we were slightly edging towards a film opening. Therefore for our final draft we added more inter-tiles, which therefore helped to increase the speed of the trailer, with more short shots, as well as give it that trailer like feel to it. e had already used non-continuity editing, which is stereotypical convention of a film trailer, but we wanted to make sure it had included the most conventions of a trailer as possible to make it seem more realistic.
Film Poster Feedback:
I received feedback form my teachers and peers when it came to my film poster, allowing me to make a more realistic portrayal of a film poster as possible.
Change 1:
First off My main imagine for my film poster was too bright for a psychological thriller film. So i used the brightness and contrast settings along with using a gradient to make the background around the door darker. I then used the brightening tool around the door to really highlight the wrapping paper and make the red ribbon pop.This therefore made the theme running throughout the whole of the trailer, and idea of the film, prominent, that being Christmas.
Change 2:
The title of the film wasn't too prominent, that was because of the fact that as it was next to the billing block the bottom of the poster was too busy and looked all crammed int, not very professional. as i had found from my research that most film posters are simple and plain, this is what i wanted to reciprocate in my own film poster. In the end i decided to move my title to the top of the film poster, this helped to make it more prominent, as there wasn't as much going on also i found that its rather stereotypical to have the title at the top of the film poster.
Change 3:
I wasn't going to add a rating with starts on my film poster at fist because when doing my research it didn't seem it was very stereotypical to include it, and therefore unnecessary., however, it was suggested that I should as my film won't be well known and neither will the production company, it gives the audience to go off of. I was told it might be a good idea to make it short and snappy, so that it won't tale too much away from the main image and therefore give a little snippet of information to the audience without revealing too much, keeping the attention of the audience hooked.
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| Final Film Poster |
Magazine Front Cover Feedback:
I received a lot of feedback on my magazine poster, some more major then others. One of the biggest ones was could i see that magazine front cover being in a shop when you walk in and wanting to pick it up?
Positive Feedback:
- I like the main image
- I like the font of the masthead
Negative Feedback:
Change 1:
- Change the arrangement of the cover lines
- Change the spacing between the words on the top, to make them more equal distance apart
- Change the text above the masthead to be more Christmas themed

I changed the cover lines so that they were all the same distance apart, and the text size was the same. I also made sure that they were all the same length, and they didn't stick out too much i used the ruler to do this to make sure everything was in line, making it look more neat and professional.
I made sure that every word for one of the cover lines was in the same text box instead of separate ones his made it easier to control the size of the font and distance between them.
Change 2:
The sky line was something on the magazine, that took me a while to create. I tried adding a shape of a rectangle behind the words, to make them work ans they were not visible because of the gradient i had on the background of the magazine cover. That didn't really work it made the poster look "tacky" and not professional. I then tried to put am outer glow on the text of a purple so that it wouldn't be too visible on the black but it would be enough to make the text stand out and be read able. No matter how much i tried to change the vibrancy of the purple it didn't look professional enough. I then decided to get rid of the purple outer glow, and make the text white so that it would stand out on the black. However, i had the problem that the text looked like it was just floating on the cover, which again didn't look realistic either. Finally i chose to go back to the rectangle shape again this time white and change my font to colour to black. this resolved the issue that it looked misplaced and wasn't visible.
Then i had to change the distance between the words on the skyline, as they were equally proportioned gaps, this again lead to it looking unprofessional. Originally every word has there own text box however, like my cover lines i made it all one text box and then just used the space tool to equal out the space between each word, therefore making it more aesthetically pleasing to look at and make it more realistic.
Change 3:
The text above the Mast head was originally " A mind Blowing Issue" this was used to try and entice the audience into wanting to watch read the magazine. However, it was suggested that it has no relation to my actual film. Therefore it was suggested that i could make it more christmassy with a pun, which resulted in it =being replaced with "Cool Yule Issue" this is a direct link to the Christmas themed holiday that the film is linked to. This fit better with the cover, as all the cover lines fit the theme so it looked a little out of place, this therefore led to it seeming more professional, as everything was linked down to the main plot and film of our film "Naughty List" that being Christmas.
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| Final Magazine Front cover |






















